Monday, March 29, 2010

In medias res

The phrase has become almost a cliché to describe a common method of beginning a story. In other words you hurry the reader into the middle of the action just as something important, some change is about to happen. Once the story is going along at a cracking pace you can shuttle back and forth using flashbacks to fill in anything we need to know. But don't do this too soon. The first page, the first paragraph, that's where it all begins . . . or ends. If the reader isn't hooked immediately you've lost the battle.
Some of effective openings:

Marley was dead to begin with. There is no doubt whatsoever about that.
(A Christmas Carol by Dickens)

It is cold at 6:40 in the morning on a March day in Paris, and seems even colder when a man is about to be executed by firing squad.
(The Day of the Jackal by Frederick Forsyth)

We were about to give up and call it a night when somebody dropped the girl off the bridge.
(Darker Than Amber by John D. MacDonald)

Please add your own favourites.

6 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

'Last night I dreamed I went back to Manderley' REBECCA, Daphne du Maurier

2:04 PM  
Anonymous careykeener said...

'All happy families resemble one another, but each unhappy family is unhappy in its own way.'
ANNA KARENINA,Leo Tolstoy

1:07 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I come from Les Moines. Somebody had to. Bill Bryson, The Lost Continent.

8:16 AM  
Blogger Roberta Grieve said...

It was a bright cold day in April and all the clocks were striking thirteen - 1984, George Orwell

10:18 AM  
Anonymous Henriette Gyland said...

"I intensely disliked my father's fifth wife, but not to the point of murder."
Hot Money by Dick Francis

12:11 PM  
Blogger Rosemary Laurey said...

'What is Papa doing with that axe?'
Charlotte's Web

4:07 PM  

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